sábado, 12 de octubre de 2013

Sacrificing Human Rights For the Sake of an Idea - 2nd Term Paper - Corrected

The Spanish Civil War started in July 1936, when a group of rebel military officers lead by Francisco Franco raised against the government of what was the second Spanish Republic. The country had been in a complicated situation for a while, and it became critical when certain groups within the Spanish society felt they were not represented by the government. This situation, and the government incapability to control their military forces and officers, helped the uprising, which led to a violent civil war as the divided military forces and the citizens fought for their supremacy. The conflict lasted until the year 1939, in which General Franco became ruler of Spain. It is not possible to say which side was more brutal, but throughout this process, many human lives were lost; people were murdered and executed, and human rights were left aside for the sake of an idea.[1]
The term ‘White Terror’ refers to acts of politically motivated violence perpetrated by the Nationalists, which was the name given to the rebels. They included the execution of members of the opposition without any kind of trial; the execution of schoolteachers for supporting the Republican laicism in schools (Nationalism was also supported by the Spanish members of the Roman Catholic Church); massacres of civilians; persecution of Protestants and Basques. It is estimated that the White Terror’s actions resulted in the deaths of 200,000 people.
‘Red Terror’ is the name given to politically motivated acts of violence perpetrated by members or followers of the government, also known as Republicans (because they supported the Republic). It is hard to know exactly how much damage the Red Terror really produced, as they were the losing group. Still, some things are clear: they were responsible for the killing of many members of the Catholic Church, as they were openly anticlerical; many civilians were executed. It is said that they killed about 38,000 people.
What is much worse, this ordeal continued after the civil war was over and the forces of General Franco took control of the country. Members of the opposition were still murdered and executed without trial, and many people had to be exiled in order to survive. It is estimated that more than 200,000 people died only in the first years of the regime, as a result of repression, famine and war-related illnesses. Also, women’s rights were left aside. They were not allowed to hold jobs if they were married, and those involved in political actions or related to members of the opposition were publicly tortured and even executed.
The belief each opposing group held, that their point of view and their position was the best for Spain, led them to fight viciously and with no considerations for the lives of those who held a different opinion or even those without a clear political position. This led to a brutal fight in which thousands of lives were lost, most of them only for having a different political allegiance. The numbers reach hundreds of thousands of victims, many civilians with no possibility of defending themselves. Human rights were violated in every possible way.



[1] Thesis statement. Expository.


Outline:
Introduction
·         Thesis Statement: “It is not possible to say which side was more brutal, but throughout this process, many human lives were lost; people were murdered and executed, and human rights were left aside for the sake of an idea.”
Suplementary material:
·         The “White Terror’s” victims
·         The “Red Terror’s” victims
·         Victims during the dictatorship
Conclusion:
·         The conflict caused the loss of all Spanish citizens’ human rights and the deaths of many innocent victims.


Paragraphs:
Paragraph 1: Introduction.
Paragraph 2: Listing paragraph. Structure: Topic Sentence + Supporting information + Conclusion sentence.
Paragraph 3: Listing paragraph. Structure: Topic Sentence + Supporting information + Conclusion sentence.
Paragraph 4: Listing paragraph. Structure: Topic Sentence + Supporting information + Conclusion sentence.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion.


Bibliography:
Spanish Civil War. Retrieved from: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spanish_Civil_War
White Terror (Spain). Retrieved from: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Terror_(Spain)
Red Terror (Spain). Retrieved from: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_Terror_(Spain)
Puche Maciá, Ramón (2008). La Guerra Civil Española. Retrieved from: http://www.guerracivil1936.galeon.com/
Dictadura de Francisco Franco. Retrieved from:  http://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dictadura_de_Francisco_Franco